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Online only. Right from the start stats show blank name under rapport for second entry.
Captain Blood: 50%
After buying a hat, the option to buy a tricorn is still available. Repeat choosing loops draining 2 gold each time. The fresh fruit and vegetables option also loops. But can you stock multiple items?
I picked the name "fox". But it doesn't appear. It is in stats. Name: Fox
How do we steal the ship, Captain ?" Jalu asks smoothly.
. Someone you recognize from the old days raises a hand. "I don't have gold, but I'll bet a night shift on ."
Stats show 0 gold but the option to fetch help is enabled.
Fetch help—for the bargain price of three gold pieces.
I thought I would have to pay for help. I see it is a fee the victim must pay!
There's a cat'o'nine tails u
Typo. Too many apostrophes.
Apparently he thinks his chest and abs are his ticket back on board
Doesn't fit after choice to merely whip him.
Number of Ships in Fleet: 0
As captain of the scarlet sails should it read 1 ship in fleet? Still shows 0 in stats after capture a ship.
lu takes the larger prize of the merchant ship. On the Scarlet Sails, you lead a mixed crew that includes several of the merchan
It does update stats to 2 on the next page:
The two ships of your fleet sail together into a wealthy future. The merchants didn't know anything
Jalu raises an eyebrow at you and copies out the riddle encircling Jalu's tattoo.
Suggest use "his" for "Jalu's".
You can use signal flags to communicate across the waves. Are you better at treachery, sweetness, or gun fu? Frankly, I think you're a terrible liar, a terrible person, and a terrible shot. But maybe that's just me.
(My bold emphasis.) I found this ?Landlubber hint a bit strong. Could cause offence.
Morality: 33% Malevolence: 67%
The value you place on human life.
Truthfulness: 53% Treachery: 47%
Your level of deceitfulness.
Skepticism: 69% Sweetness: 31%
Whether you trust in the goodness of others.
Sober: 55% Sozzled: 45%
Your ability to handle strong liquor and/or become an alcoholic.
Gun Fu: 10%
Magical Skill: 27%
People on both ships are getting friendlier and friendlier. A pirate's life is short, but it's merry. Why not fall in love at first sight, when you might die the next day?
It's an effort to keep from using your magic, but you're getting more skilled at remaining in your own skin these days. You sense someone watching you, and…
Been at sea a while, haven't you? As long as the relevant rapport statistic is decent, you're probably not imagining those tender looks. But be aware that Captain Blood won't get involved with someone who's too moral, and Truman won't get involved with someone who's too malevolent.
Landlubber comment mentions Captain Blood but I chose to set out on my own leaving Blood. There is an option to kiss Blood but therefore Blood must have been on the merchantman (dressed in white?) which is surprising. Continuity!
This is what it feels like to be at the mercy of nature: the time a pirate feels most alive.
You could use "Nature". On my path I was kissing Firebird.
think I'm in love, but the night doesn't have to end there. Why not love another?
Suggest use "end here" for the present tense.
You see a new kid called Nara lose her self-control and dive overboard to kiss
On this path I met her earlier during training with a blunt sword. So: the new kid called Nara...
I love that you can resist the mermaid's enslavement by true love.
Truman stands along at the stern and weeps as three other dolls are made one by
?typo along (alone)
Some days later, it's Jalu's turn to take you aside. "May I tell you my real name?"
For the first time, you get to see him taken by surprise. "You knew?"
Continuity. Jalu already revealed his secret identity much earlier ?after I defeated him in a duel. On this path, Jalu knows that I know his secret identity.
In the fight chapter, the option to call on Captain Blood doesn't fit on this path without Blood.