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matt w: I'm pretty sure that was exactly what the narrative punch was supposed to be.

Well, yes and no... there's a difference between a punch and a punch that presupposes why you made the choice you did.

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Aaron Reed - Creating Interactive Fiction with Inform 7 - Smarter Parser

I like this.

Like tove, I don't think I would have noticed the procedural parts were procedural without the highlighting. (Additional runthroughs, which I have not done, might not change that.) This speaks well for their smoothness, but doesn't say much about how they influence the work.

I really really enjoyed this. Top notch writing, honestly. I was expecting some revelation of some sort at the end, but the simplicity of the ending left you thinking about you're actions.