My sci-fi game Aurora is ready for beta-testing. I've combed it pretty thoroughly for bugs, so just enjoy (and give me copious feedback, since it's my first game). It's Glulx.
You can email me, but I'll be gone this week for Thanksgiving. The latest version should be up on IFDB now or soon, though.
My main testing questions are below.
Dr Liang doesn't contribute much to the plot. Should I take her out?
The Tell function is used far less than the Ask function; a character may respond to 30 Ask topics but only 3 Tell topics. Should I take it out?
How is the artwork? Should there be more/less/different/none of it?
Since I'm mainly a traditional-fiction author, I could use help with my IF writing style.
Better title ideas are also gratefully accepted.