peterorme wrote:
Cool, Welcome aboard, ArmanX - did you see the google doc?
Is anybody actually working on a story in this setting? I have one basically plotted out and started writing it (in inform7) but I'm currently working on other things.
JJ, how about you?
I'm not so sure about including Tortuga in the name, that was more of a reference than something that's actually in the world. But that's up for discussion I guess.
The "black mark" sounds good, maybe a bit generic, and why is it black?
I thought of trying to come up with some Latin or Greek for "changing" but "mutant" is just that... The Greek god Proteus is a god associated with water and shape shifting, that sounds pretty suitable, so maybe "protean" is a good word to throw in there to describe the plague? The protean plague? Proteus syndrome?
I did see the doc, and I'll try to add to it - as soon as I get back to my desktop. Heh.
The Black Mark is traditioal pirate lore, mentioned in Treasure Island and ruined in the second (?) Pirates movie. It's a 'mark of death'. In Treasure Island, the recipient was given a piece of paper with a blotch of ink on it. In this story, it would make sense that anyone who gets infected with the plague would have some common symptom - a black mark on their body. People trying to keep it a secret might have it under hair, or just chop it off - better a hook than a black mark, eh?
I like Proteus Plague, and perhaps The Proteus Problem for a title?
Finally, while the map is invented, some places referenced should be real, like Tortuga. Certain locations are well-known in pirate lore, and thus by pirates. The locations don't have to be accessible, but it would be good to tie them in.