Cheers!
The Train of Life, a short Twine Ectocomp 2016 game, has been proof-read by the great mathbrush and now is available for the masses in a better English.
Go check (if slightly interested) on IFDb or check it here: http://www.andromedalegacy.com/ttol/TheTrainofLife.html
Thanks for the help, mathbrush. May the Force be with you!