Hello! I’ve created my first-ever interactive horror game in Harlowe Twine and would be very grateful for beta testers on desktops/mobiles.
It’s a short ten-minute game with multiple endings.
Many thanks in advance.
Dolores and the Cave is online freeware and can be played here:
https://www.mookychick.co.uk/dolores-and-the-cave.php
Hi! I played through “Dolores and the Cave”, the premise was interesting. Here are my notes:
Typos:
I’m injured. I need to stabalise my wounds…
stabalise = stabilize
A index finger is worth something
a=an
Text:
Chris, their name was. They had always been so kind to you.
They should be he or she, Misery knows Chris’ sex. Using “they” as a singular pronoun also sounds jarring to readers.
Gameplay:
There should be more names given to the player during the adventure as red herrings for Misery’s identity, it’s too obvious even if one isn’t following the plot.
I hope that this is useful to you! I enjoyed your game.
Hi, that’s so helpful of you, thank you very much for taking the time to play!