Help with storytelling and some ideas.

I’we just started with IF, and I think it’s quite interesting. Since my native language is Swedish I would like some help in writing, or at least correcting, and suggestions on how to make the text more “living”.

The plot of the story is set, but I haven’t filled out everything from start to finish, so any good ideas will be welcome. The whole idea is that the reader will build up a picture, which will totally change when the last piece of the puzze is revealed.

I haven’t started writing the text, so there is nothing to share right now, except for the plot.

Probably I will need some help in coding specific tasks further on in the project, but I don’t want to take out all the fun of it just yet :wink:

/Marcus Blass

Well, I’m a professional editor in real life, so if you need any help, I’d be happy to look it over.

Hi,

I’d be happy to help out with story, writing, or whatever.

Neil
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