looking for sugestions to add more pazaz to a project

I am doing a simple inform7 project and I would be interested in help and suggestions to make it more flashy looking.
It is a speculative fiction project roleplayed off of a street map/and bus routes near citgo (a story based on where objects are placed in corpus christi) explaining how something
could have happened (Doesn’t mean it did that why it is speculative). It’s speculative about 911 so it could be offensive
(just as anyone who is involved with 911 would be offensive)

mainly I am intrested in graphic tricks, menus exc whatever would make it stand out.
test.zip (83 KB)

Interactive Fiction is really more about kapow rather than pazaz.