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PostPosted: Sun Nov 12, 2017 2:41 am 
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Hello everyone, I'm new to Twine and started writing a story with it. I was hoping some of you may be interested in reviewing what I have so far and leaving me some feedback and helpful criticism. It would be very much appreciated. There are three major branches - one where you play a member of high royalty, another where you are a member of the peasantry, and another where you play a slave. You choose this at the beginning when asked to follow a proto-thought destined for the mind of royalty, a serf, or a slave. Right now choose royalty as that is the only branch currently developed.

The current story can be found here: http://cyclic-odyssey.000webhostapp.com/


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Very impressive so far. I can clearly visualize what you're describing and it feels a lot like having an out of the body experience, but in a game.

Really keen to see where you take it.


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